Revisions on Paper, health and medicine homework help

Scored a 100/150 for Final Paper. Allowed to do revisions for better grade.  Screenshots show the comments and revisions she made.  As well as attached grading rubric on how she scored it.  

-Also create a cover page of what revisions were made to the paper

* Will attach moe documents ASAP *

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